All Comments on 'Mirror Mirror on the Wall'

this is a wonderful look at the way we look at ourselves sometimes. Thanks!

however the varying line lengths and couplets made the rhyme feel very forced, as if you simply ended the line when you could finally get a rhyme to work. I think you would do better with this poem if you went to a less restrictive rhyme scheme. Perhaps choose a set line length (by syllable count) and then work to get the right rhyming words within that length. It is a good exercise in finding just the exact best word for each line in your poem.

jim : )