All Comments on 'Missionary Position'

"He’s got a bible belt quoted tongue

and knuckles quick to knock

vivid visions of government

and a mesmerizing talk"

what an excellent verse! good use of alliteration and fresh images

aswirls

and i can see the rigid standards seeping right through this one. i can feel it in a lot of different ways. it's a wonderful piece. keep it up......Don

An excellent use of

words and emotions,

very well written too.

Thanks.

~ Jenn