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by sweet GA peaches

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LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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What an exquisite way

to start the day,

in the arms of love

provided by sweet GA peaches.....

Aunty MuseAunty Museover 18 years ago
Edit

to(o) many raindrops

of a petal(')s blush,

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
your poem

has been mentioned on the new poem thread* blue *

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
More than "O's"

These are my favorite lines:

"where downpours

spare no rhthym,

and seeping puddles

cannot dance."

But to be honest I liked the whole damn thing.

lol,bd

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