All Comments on 'Morning My Love # 2'

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LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Night's love

into daybreak yearning;

a wake up call not to be denied ~

soon breakfast will call.

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 18 years ago
great flow

I am still laughing for(two critics) will probably take two total different views of this one too <bigrin> I am glad you listen to your own heart and not those who are trying to rearrange YOUR words.

oh by the way....morning love

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
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Sounds like this morning took all night long. Of course when you are having fun, who cares about time.

ty,bd

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Sweet

A sweet and charming poem. Great stuff, RF

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
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Another hottie from RF!

I would've like to see "the" instead of "tha", and "it's" for tis, but I just couldn't knock down the score. Very sexy!

sal

sacksackover 18 years ago
I especially like.....

"red rosy cheeks from your divin' below"....neat little poem!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
The little gin sounds great!

I'm not sure about the counting. I just set the timer for thirty minutes!

Cute poem that says it right!

don87654don87654over 18 years ago
Very erotic and natural

All the right words when you are with someone you love....

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