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DawnJDawnJalmost 12 years ago
Pretty...

...and pretty gruesome! How unexpected a twist at the end! Did that poor creature batter itself to death, then get stepped on? Nicely handled!

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
24 HOURS

for some a day....to others a lifetime, TK U MLJ LV NV

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