All Comments on 'Moths to the Flame'

Very detailed, love it. Great images. Think about adding a little more to some of the lines to make it the same count throughout. I know a lot of people say at times that it's too much, but I have to disagree. In this type of poetry, it needs more words. Don't forget the counting- it will really help with the flow. You're gonna kill me if I keep saying that, aren't you?! LOL!

cassually begins with the moths attraction to the flame

then the infactuation the power the poetic nature of the moths demise drawn....great concept

with its unknown forces decide their fates. TK U MLJ LV NV