- Erotic Poetry
- My Desire
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Click hereHow do I tell you, you’re all I desire?
how the sound of your voice sets me on fire;
How the longing within gives me such pleasure;
how the words that you whisper, I’ll forever treasure?
How do I tell you, I long for your kiss;
how just one moment with you would fill me with bliss?
How do I tell you I crave your embrace;
how I would love to gaze upon your handsome face?
How do I tell you when you whispered my name
how my thoughts and my dreams haven’t been the same?
How do I tell you you’ve made my days bright;
how I long for your touch throughout the cold night?
How do I tell you without pushing you away;
how my need for you deepens with each passing day?
How do I tell you what my wish would be;
how I desire just one day -- for you and for me?
- COMMENTS
Sicilian24almost 14 years agoAmazing write, I loved it from the beginning to end. In my eyes it was flawless, wonderful job!
MrFantasyManover 18 years agoHoney...I have just started reading you work and I am very impressed...you have a great talent and it appears a strong following...you show a great deal of the emotion that fuels your words...lovely...
Southflpornstarover 18 years agoBeautiful!
I am looking forward to reading each and every Poem and Story that this Lovely Authoress has posted here on the site :)
Bill Dadaover 18 years agoJust a hunch but I think you desire more that just one day, like I said just a hunch.
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bashfullover 18 years agoReading this, I felt as if we could see into your mind, your thoughts, your soul. The emotion really comes through, darlin'.
Belegonover 18 years agoI continue to watch as you stretch out as a writer and poet and I continue to enjoy that evolution...you have an honesty in your writing that I adore. I agree with sack about the rhyme scheme, but I also recognize one of my own limitations therein and admire your effort because of it.
And of course, these are eternal questions. The kind that there is never an easy answer for, which makes them the perfect topic for poetry. I continue to be one of your biggest fans...
sackover 18 years agoThis might have been even better if you didn't try to make the lines rhyme, and used shorter sentences overall. I felt you were trying too hard for the rhymes, and that effected the flow of the poem.
SummerMorningover 18 years ago... but somehow the cadence and rhythm didn't quite catch me the way some of your other poems do. It's a lovely poem, to be sure, but I get the feeling it's not saying everything you want it to say.
