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by Senna Jawa
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SweetOblivionalmost 14 years agoLovely and impactful
To paint such a colourful picture in so few words is a real achievement - well done. SO
lorencinoalmost 13 years ago~
This is paralysingly powerful. I feel at one with your father as I read the last line of your poem.
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