All Comments on 'Net Groom'

is there a club-- a cool name? we need one

hmmm

I have used the term literary exhibitionist and verbal voyeur, but it is more than that isn't it?

this part cracked me up! I enjoyed reading this.

"What wonderous text

He does exude!

Such text that

Takes me

Makes me

Nude."

A word on a screen, thousand miles away, can seem just as real and make us feel in ways that would had been thought of as insane only a decade or two ago. The world is changing. This poem reflects that very well. Good job. :)

One little word of advise though: The way you start every line with a capital letter makes some places really weird to read. No real need for that, I think.

here and an excellent ending. Fragile web indeed...

and the dark spider.

well done...

jim :)

....courtesy of anna's mentioning it in the poetry forum. I'm glad I looked it's a good piece of work from a newly arrived poet. Welcome - I look fprward to more of your work.

Dear Icing Sugar, I agree with you about the caps. I didn't like it either, so I am submitting an edit. Thanks for the advice.

And to all who take the time who comment, my sincere appreciation.