All Comments on 'Nightfall'

I like all the images. Very cool. The poem is a tad wordy. But still, a nice illustrated effort. :)

A nice write, though it strikes me as more a collection than a single verse.

I like the word choice, and I enjoyed reading, but feel it was a little wordy as well. It appeared to me as more than one poem.

Lovely pictures!

Loved the blend of the quiet retreat with the reason for being there. Sensual, loving fulfillment. Very nice my friend.

The lovely pictures along with the word images you have painted ~ with a masterful stroke, tells the story. We are surrounded by inspiration that ignites the senses.

images that blend nicely with your choice of words..

Beatifical Piece the First Part of it anyways it's just that I don't Believe that the Images also Beautiful by the way, just doesn't match or fit the words. And that is pretty much what killed it for me.