- Non-Erotic Poetry
- North by Northwest
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Click herePillow clouds boil up over the sea
in springs unconstant sky.
They fight the old man from the north
pushing him farther away.
Waves pound with the force of change,
nothing is easy in nature.
Sparrow in the air
it's flight razor sharp.
Sun scathing green feathers,
fighting brothers
for the same lover.
The wind moves cold against my skin
whispering secrets of warmth.
The only constant in this world is change,
nothing is easy in nature.
- COMMENTS
twelveooneabout 19 years agoI have a small problem with this contradiction. Contradiction, should be in a series, otherwise it will be perceived as a mistake. I know change is mentioned, but...
"The wind moves cold against my skin
whispering secrets of warmth."
good line:
"in springs unconstant sky."
good stanza:
"Sparrow in the air
it's flight razor sharp.
Sun scathing green feathers,
fighting brothers
for the same lover."
dcpoet44about 19 years agois all that needs to be said. that doesn't mean i'm not gonna pick up my favorite lines.
Sparrow in the air
it's flight razor sharp.
Sun scathing green feathers,
fighting brothers
for the same lover.
Bridget69about 19 years agoprovide an invigorating breath of fresh air. Very nice!
My Erotic Taleabout 19 years agoblow constant <grin>
I loved your write, enchanting poetry~ 'winds of change' are strong enough <smile>
WickedEveabout 19 years agobut I have to agree with ishtat. The ending could be stronger. Despite that, good job. :)
