All Comments on 'Nostalgia'

...like this one. You do tend to have an odd turn of phrase but once the reader gets over that this is quite readable and fun. I particularly like the final line.

Tess

You have a very personal way of stringing your words together, new and exciting and I like :)

the last line, but am wondering if "laying" should be "lying"?

Maybe, maybe not, but an enjoyable read.

~ maria

You have an original turn of phrase which is a helpful trait in poetry. It makes your voice unique. Stanza three does not help this otherwise excellent poem; you have lurched into commentary. I think as it stands, if you ditched it, it would be an amazing poem.

Lovely!