All Comments on 'nothing like it'

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TzaraTzaraover 18 years ago
Yikes!

Erotic, scary intense, and kind of sad, all at the same time. Liked it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Powerful, but...

takes too long to make its point. Shocking language ends up feeling gratuitous.

Fly

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
~~

Did so good

til reality set in

and fun fantasy

dissolves at the sink.

twelveoonetwelveooneover 18 years ago
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Agree with T - intense, and kind of sad, all at the same time

Disagree with F - you have a shitload (excuse, please) of powerful lines, images, I do not think you could have trimmed much, to get across what you did without it.

Boldy goes where no man has gone before...it is not "poetic" and a little disturbing, reminds me a little of WickedEve, someone else that dares not to be "poetic", not to pander. There is a lot going on here if one can force oneself to look beyond the obvious. I do not love it, it can be trimmed a little, but it is an honest 5(100).

4degrees4degreesover 18 years ago
fuck yes

and, fuck yes.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
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OMG and holy shit! (no pun)

This is bad, it's good! I'll have to agree with another who said the message took a little too long. It should be trimmed.

dcpoet44dcpoet44over 18 years ago
smells dirty....

and stinks to high heaven...*LOL*...it sure gets its point across vividly. nicely done seattle......don

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 13 years ago
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still is

I already voted

my votive

and left a comment long ago

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