All Comments on 'O' Sweet Lady'

by Zariel

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HarryHillHarryHillover 11 years ago
Far off broadway here.

chop out all the repetition like a good subbie; that would please me.

twelveoonetwelveooneover 11 years ago
rep's

disagrees with harry, are what make this thing

Takes up, everything, my soul and wealth

Takes up, my essence and my life

Ends thy turmoil, ends thy strife

here you adding contrast, but thy doesn't fit, my does

I have prayers to, too

5ed, because this is the only thing of this genre that actually sings

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
CONFESSIONS OF THE MIND

dont always free the soul. TK U MLJ LV NV

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