All Comments on 'Occam's Aftershave'

It reads like prose to me, with line breaks to give it a poetic structure.

This is the best part:

What can

the red-legged Kittiwake

teach us about

unbiased Wealth Management?

very little, unfortunately

since

Kittiwakes lack the ability

to speak a human language

maybe one could

peck a lesson plan

on your head

might be, I love your title most of all, really cool, your insight is just great and your sarcasm gets the point across easily,,,did you write a razor part yet? ;)

...in more ways than one. Engrossing, and the title is wonderful. The philosophy of simple explanation.

The quantum p guruhood of platypussys (platypuses? platypii?) was supposed to be a secret! Now they'll never help me take over the world...

A really fun read. And an awesome title.

looks into some facets of everyday life today. It read more like some sharply pointed prose rather than poetry though. There are some insightful witticisms but I thought it would be stronger poetry if you used images to show me, rather than just outline your conclusions. I wonder if Occam would try this aftershave... good one.

jim : )