All Comments on 'Ocean Drive'

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LeBrozLeBrozabout 16 years ago
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On a sonnet roll, inspired here perhaps by your local scenery? Very vivid imagery let loose in this one.

KOLKOREKOLKOREabout 16 years ago
On the verge of a sensory over load...

I believe I would have quickly gotten into a sensory overload were I to be exposed to your daily feasts all strewn around... Even the small sample you sent us got me a little crazy... Where exactly you said you live to see clouds of Flamingo at your ocean driveway? <P>

You were able to bring to life the pictures; the colors and the mood, not an easy task. Somehow even the crowds there don't seem to fare too badly... I wouldn't mind more authentic sights...

champagne1982champagne1982about 16 years ago
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I'd love to visit your evening and leave the crowds to neon too. Well done.

KOLKOREKOLKOREabout 16 years ago
Vavum!

(that is my primal cry of joy) Details later.

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