All Comments on 'Ode To A Cock'

by lilywhite31

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
good

this could be a good poem. two points: 1)is the word 'might' in line 8 a typo, changing it to 'mighty' would sound better

2) consider using different images, too much concrete images makes the poem sound a little samey. suprise the reader!

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Not much to add to cward2's thoughts;

just let me add

Welcome to Lit with this

your first write...

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