All Comments on 'Ohhh'

...this and in the 'Morning' the loving was different but just as good

can time stop please ....

..tell myself not to move

to stay a bit longer ......

Magnum you can stop Time & prolong Orgasm indefinitely through will-power , Muscle control , Breath control [ Pranayama] & yoga [ Mool Bandh asana or Root -lock pose ] : 5-ed .

I enjoyed both of your poems. I love that you examined the perspective of both the male's and a female's love making. Having the action take place from both sides was a great view (counter)point for the reader. You may or may not have meant for these poems to be related or even for us to interpret that it is the same couple. But, that was how I read it (maybe because of the consecutive submissions). I guess it's all in the eye of the beholder. Again, it was nicely done, enjoyed it, and thank you.

trying to describe the beast without. TK U MLJ LV NV