All Comments on 'Omniscience'

The tree’s __ can rejuvenate

The tree's what? Tree's is possessive, so what word is missing?

Too wordy. Tighten it up:

There is a thread in my head.

It tugs at the minor scribbling of creation.

Trees can rejuvenate.

Water may caress infinitely.

And the world is a rose.

enjoyed reading this. I loved the imagery, esp the line

'And the world is a rose'

Thanks for the great read