- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Once More
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Author's Note; Though I know what it may seem like, but please note that what I allude to could not necessarily have to refer to a revelation as to relation between two people, but how a friend could bring to light what has been amiss in one's life through their own.
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Like the moon that shines at night
So too my heart has found your light
And awakens to feelings once lost before
It feels like I may love once more
My heart cried out and you have heard
But somehow it seems a bit absurd
That of the few that came to hear
You in end chose to stay near
I thank you from the bottom of my heart
That in the end we did not part
For you helped me open my eyes to see
That love could still happen to someone like me
- COMMENTS
HarryHillabout 11 years agoespecially the first three and the last two lines.... but then what do you expect from a sentimental old man like me?
erectus123about 11 years agois a bit trite and overused, might you change that? otherwise a good effort,
you preface is a little too wordy and unneeded as it limits the poem's range, as a comment, if needed, you might add it at end and say "friendship as well as intimacy heal the broken heart" but I think it would have been better if the message was included in the poem, but that is just my take, keep it up!
