All Comments on 'Once More'

is a bit trite and overused, might you change that? otherwise a good effort,

you preface is a little too wordy and unneeded as it limits the poem's range, as a comment, if needed, you might add it at end and say "friendship as well as intimacy heal the broken heart" but I think it would have been better if the message was included in the poem, but that is just my take, keep it up!

especially the first three and the last two lines.... but then what do you expect from a sentimental old man like me?

Very moving and beautifully written. Thank you for sharing.