All Comments on 'Once Upon A Falling Star'

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Jennifer CJennifer Calmost 19 years ago
Yep

I think we've all made

the same wish at some

point in time, we all want

to love and be loved.

Loved this

But how could I entrust my dreams,

to something so bizarre.

For it was just a wish I made,

upon a falling star.

Nice work.

Thanks.

~ J

Bridget69Bridget69almost 19 years ago
Very true...

how we often entrust our wishes to a mere fleeing and unreachable object.

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