All Comments on 'Only If You Let It'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Much more to the story

The sheer power of this poem comes from what is not said. Hidden thoughts and desires left unchecked, but not entirely hidden. What is real? What is fanatasy? Both are required to ask when reading this poem. Very short and concise, but clearly stated. The underlying tones of true mystique. I love the feel of this poem and it's tone that you've given it. It speaks volumes without being needlessly wordy, unlike this comment. ;)

Tom CollinsTom Collinsabout 18 years ago
Somewhat true...

But can you always control it? Aye...there's the rub, precious. But I feel the sentiment...the message...in my core. I where from you speak.

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