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by quasar

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jthserrajthserraover 19 years ago
an orbiting oral oratory...

some interesting consonance and assonance here. An odd poem... very good.

jim : )

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 19 years ago
mention

Your Poem was mentioned on the thread

'New Poems Reviews'

thanks for the journey~

WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
very cool

This was a delight to read. :)

ishtatishtatover 19 years ago
Orright

Charles Boyle would have liked your invention too.I did.

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