All Comments on 'Paradise'

is very very nice <grin>

Your writes are enchanting mi amiga

You know you write all these pretty words and disgustingly sweet verses but you never actually say anything! Pretending to be a nice person doesn't make you a good poet!

I got what you were saying and loved taking the journey.

Anon hasn't got a clue as she spews her personal attack.

A tale with dark foreboding;

fear of love fleeting

and Paradise being

... ... lost