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by RhymeFairy

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LeBrozLeBrozalmost 19 years ago
Is This RF's Dark Period ???

Anon hasn't got a clue as she spews her personal attack.

A tale with dark foreboding;

fear of love fleeting

and Paradise being

... ... lost

bigntenderbigntenderalmost 19 years ago
I got it

I got what you were saying and loved taking the journey.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Go home

You know you write all these pretty words and disgustingly sweet verses but you never actually say anything! Pretending to be a nice person doesn't make you a good poet!

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Talealmost 19 years ago
paradise

is very very nice <grin>

Your writes are enchanting mi amiga

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