All Comments on 'Paradise found'

by tungtied2u

Sort by:
  • 3 Comments
RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 18 years ago
* Fans Self *

Grrr ~

I am sooo loving this poem.

I can feel it, taste it

and just wanna dive into it ~!!!

Great imagery and

metaphorical usage.

Your words just swirl

into mind and take over.

You really pull a person in

and just fill them up ~!!!

More more more plezz~!!!

Can ya tell I like it?

*Grins*

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 18 years ago
mention

Your poem was mentioned in the thread "New Poems Reviews"

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
you have a grand

ability to pull the reader with charm and charisma...sinfully delectablue...

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous