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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
you have a grand

ability to pull the reader with charm and charisma...sinfully delectablue...

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 18 years ago
mention

Your poem was mentioned in the thread "New Poems Reviews"

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 18 years ago
* Fans Self *

Grrr ~

I am sooo loving this poem.

I can feel it, taste it

and just wanna dive into it ~!!!

Great imagery and

metaphorical usage.

Your words just swirl

into mind and take over.

You really pull a person in

and just fill them up ~!!!

More more more plezz~!!!

Can ya tell I like it?

*Grins*

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