All Comments on 'PC bustle'

the Horror! the Horror!

sometimes keep your ears open, before you start kickin ass.

you have the title of the tune right, yeah.

Simplicity here is the key... the title works well with the poem. Many complex emotional and rhetorical issues addressed here (fangy grin) but I like the ending of this work.. it speaks volumes in the message of letting go, as the cat says??? NO????

Quote:

I shrug

squeeze into a slot

rattle my say

turn away

stretch my arms wide

as I turn and look out my window

across the open field

at the tranquil river

flowing by

Maybe I'll write today!

The silence broken when

the cat speaks "NOOOOO"

and right to the point and rings so true. my favorite spot is:

I might have even got bitch slapped

I don't know

it didn't hurt

and you have the line, "I got bumped" right where it should be - first. How well we know that lyric - you're on aoHell like Me. Very clever poem, Art - almost as clever as your cat. <wink>.

Vixxx

Yep that would be you, only I don't think to many could bitch slap you and get away with it. And shadow demanding attention these days, Pet the kitty Art.

Nin:)

An absolutley cracking poem Art, loved it! Very accurate and humourus I loved

Maybe I'll write today!

The silence broken when

the cat speaks "NOOOOO"

My cat does that too!

~ J

bitch slapped! 5

I can see it also applying to life and criticism in general. Ah.. we roll with it and use it eh?

Nice work, you get better with every new write and it's good to see the progression ;)

toooo cute! LOVED IT and how true in life as well! :)