by Kaishaku
this poem unfolded like the tail of stars... really very lovely poem, the peacock did not seem to belong on the road until the feathers... thank you for sharing it with us
Depth and intrigue move through this poem. I felt stillness and motion all in a breath.
thank you
du lac~
mentioned in the Sunday on Monday reviews
is just release a contented sigh/ like now/
ahhhh
beautiful poem
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