All Comments on 'peacock'

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Jennifer CJennifer Calmost 19 years ago
Nice work

Conratulations on the E.

~ J

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 19 years ago
nice

very nice poem. I like it. :)

duckiesmutduckiesmutalmost 19 years ago
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What a lovely way to start my reading.

I enjoyed this. :)

annaswirlsannaswirlsalmost 19 years ago
the unfolding

this poem unfolded like the tail of stars... really very lovely poem, the peacock did not seem to belong on the road until the feathers... thank you for sharing it with us

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
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Depth and intrigue move through this poem. I felt stillness and motion all in a breath.

thank you

du lac~

mentioned in the Sunday on Monday reviews

Maria2394Maria2394over 17 years ago
sometimes all I can do

is just release a contented sigh/ like now/

ahhhh

beautiful poem

LeBrozLeBrozalmost 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,500 poems.

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