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LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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So out of sync

so impractical

so messy

so what

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so many other possibilities...

dcpoet44dcpoet44over 18 years ago
humorous......

and a finger does do the trick. something innocent but so mindfully dirty.....nicely done...don

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 18 years ago
cute

vivid and tasteful write

WriteOfWayWriteOfWayabout 13 years ago
I love peanut butter...

...and yet, I love chocolate. Does one ever have to choose between them, make that ultimate choice, turn his back on one and cling to the other? I believe that one can have both in his life. A company has made untold millions banking on that same philosophy.

This is my favorite poem of yours. So playful, elegant, succinct. No wasted words. Very nicely done.

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