All Comments on 'Pictures Of Dorianne Laux'

by Newnamed

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AngelineAngelinealmost 16 years ago
A few errors

and a sort of disappointing ending to me--there must be a better way to say that--but still your poetry always comes across to me.

Your poem has been recommended in the New Poems Reviews thread today on Literotica's Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum. Thanks for the read!

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