All Comments on 'Planning Behind'

You have some excellent images and I like the style. I am not sure about the last line. It may be overkill. I might have stopped with just the ice cream melting.

I am not using the thermometer (the only good thing I ever got from ydd)

-- you clearly have a wonderful feel for language, and this poem is lovely piece by piece --almost every line is scruptious. All together, I think a rewrite would help, with punctuation changes to assist overall flow.

...has been mentioned in Tuesday's new poem reviews.

Wonderful poem. I enjoyed this.