by MzFly
Absolutely fan-fucking-tastic. Love the use of language, the beat...omg love it!!
I really appreciate the feedback & kind words. Thank you @Lesseloovespeter
this is cool, you have a sweet flowing rhythm, could be pared back in few places, but all in all solid work :)
Wonderfully creative. The use of descriptive phrases for you and your lover added zest and clarity. "Satisfied with satisfaction." Shiver me timbers, mate... you rock the house!
A Multitalented poet with STYLE and a sense of HUMOR? ** grinning **
So damn HOT!
** BRILLIANT **
I can only imagine what your poetry, will be like in a few more years?
HotSexyLesbian: Toula.
I am agog, Wait, that's not what I meant, damn, I'm a total trembling wreck. Cat's got my tongue. Can't even wrap my brain around the words I need to express how wonderfully playful and arousing this was as I read it. I was perched, tightly wound, waiting as you teased and sprung every word and phrase.
This is one of the most erotic pieces of writing I have read. Wonderful. The playfulness, humor, sexiness, wow...I am rambling, I know, but if I wasn't running at the mouth and gushing, I'd be breathless and speechless.
Thank you.