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I just came over from your Drunkenness non-erotic poem. You've once again caught me by surprise with a last line. Nicely done. :) But she finds a vibrator's gaze? What? Funny.

I looked over at my nightstand, and there it was, like the monolith from 2001: A Space Odyssey. I call that a gaze, lol.

O! thank you! I've always said that erotica, if it's not tragic, needs to be humorous, and you succeed on both counts. I keep re-reading this like I keep re-reading Yeats, it sums up so much of my life [second coming, indeed]