by Liar
Is to be able to write like you...<grin>
You not only gave me a verbal arsenal that I did play
with but with this poem for some reason I learned to
slow down my reading to understand, I suffer from speed read syndrome...thanks for your comments and help Liar~
and of course the wonderful reads...
I saw this one on the boards too.. Loved it.. Can see you just needing the time...space...yearning....go away... tick...tock..
As always your work is exceptional.. "tempo of tension" just that line says it all..Keep them coming~~~
don't work with a lot of poems, yet a lot of poets try it. You succeed. Of course, you're a wonderful poet, so maybe that's why.
they give this such a restless feel; anxious and tense. Well done, Liar