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by Liar

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My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 19 years ago
All I want?

Is to be able to write like you...<grin>

You not only gave me a verbal arsenal that I did play

with but with this poem for some reason I learned to

slow down my reading to understand, I suffer from speed read syndrome...thanks for your comments and help Liar~

and of course the wonderful reads...

LilDarlinLilDarlinover 19 years ago
Tick..Tock~

I saw this one on the boards too.. Loved it.. Can see you just needing the time...space...yearning....go away... tick...tock..

As always your work is exceptional.. "tempo of tension" just that line says it all..Keep them coming~~~

WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
those line breaks

don't work with a lot of poems, yet a lot of poets try it. You succeed. Of course, you're a wonderful poet, so maybe that's why.

flyguy69flyguy69over 19 years ago
I love the short lines

they give this such a restless feel; anxious and tense. Well done, Liar

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