All Comments on 'Prepared to Swallow'

This is a really good piece of work you have here. Much said without actually saying it. The message is clear

This is a really strong

piece, a clear message

with few words.

Great writing,

Thanks.

~ Jenn

Your poem was mentioned in the Sunday Reviews

du lac~

proposes one thing and it conveys a dual voice. very nice work i've been seeing from you........don

Drinking a bit too much

I lay down on a friend’s bed

waking up with my pants half-down

a man next to me

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great image.

Read it and ran away, came back and read it again. Strong, nice, not many poems make me bolt. I came back to tell you it did.

that made me swallow... had my attention from begining to end... THAT IS MOTION ! -sweet GA peaches -