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by laelia
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YDDabout 20 years agoquake
An interesting short read, but the landscape = skin metaphor has been completely bulldozed and exfoliated.
Tathagataabout 20 years ago"spill
of liquid simmer"
great phrase
: )
always something to be found in your work thats new
thank you
jthserraabout 20 years agoExcellent and very erotic...
I love the phrasing here, with some moving (perhaps quaking) imagery. And the ripples on the landscape of your skin was fantastic. Well done...
jim : )
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