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twelveoonealmost 13 years agoA 5
toss this:
s2
Or the distant beat of pagan drums
could be better.
S1 strikes me as brilliant
Anonymousalmost 13 years agopagan drums the only thing not right. Jumps out as too much effort. The rest is really good. Nice job.
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