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I found some clever lines in this poem,

a very nice read and an excellent poem

yet it still brings up many important issues to contemplate. I especially liked this part,

"we dream

of sharing

ourselves

fully

and being understood

without judgement

or comment...

accepted as the person we are

not the one others perceive."

Very true and very well said.

Well written words translate feelings to which I relate. What more could one want from Sunday morning poetry. Good job.

~Syn

that when i read it this morning, i'd be back to it again. all in all a great read. if a reader comes back to it, it has left an impression. but these few lines really pack a punch for me:

So much of each of us

is

purposefully hidden

because we NEED to feel

there is something ours alone...