by ramonathompson
Was a good poem.Waiting for your story project sounds interesting. Thanks for the poem.
it makes me think that someday I'll read one of your poems and actually be like "this is quality satire". It's still a mess though, there's plenty of lines that reveal a laziness. I can't imagine that you write something then re-write it multiple times to reach some sort of frame. Blank page, fill the page, submit. boo.