by ramonathompson
it makes me think that someday I'll read one of your poems and actually be like "this is quality satire". It's still a mess though, there's plenty of lines that reveal a laziness. I can't imagine that you write something then re-write it multiple times to reach some sort of frame. Blank page, fill the page, submit. boo.
Was a good poem.Waiting for your story project sounds interesting. Thanks for the poem.