All Comments on 'Real Me'

Tell me is it wrong that I'm so turned on after reading this poem that I want someone to treat me like I'm a piece of meat?

I thought not.

*grin*

I absolutely love your writing and I think that the strongest facet to it is the way that you convey the feelings through your word choices. As in, I was reading this and I got so swept up in the moment that I felt like the woman in the poem and I actually think that I forgot to breahte there for a moment or two.

I always look forward to reading your new submissions. I can't wait for the next one.

Cheers!