All Comments on 'Red Welts'

by fieryjen

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My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailalmost 18 years ago
mention

this poem was mentioned in the New Poem Reviews Thread

thanks for the literary journey (~_~)

AmyfriendAmyfriendover 17 years ago
The swooshing sound..

of the whip as it misses her arse by a whisker. Pain and pleasure are so close, who knows where it starts.

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