by jd4george
...from start to finish...i like the structure and style, again a good example for those who write this type of run-poetry to look and examine the poet's control.
very netaly on this page. A good portrait with exactly the right tome.
This is a well balanced poem, with emotion and attitude to drive it home. Very well done, jd.
too controlled for me...but Tara is probably right.
: )
I like the style...and the bleakness..I just wanted a little more detail which probably would have spoiled it.
Great work as always
will set John free and then put his ass in jail again.
I like this my favorite of the three you posted. It might
be because it was the shortest or the most true.