All Comments on 'religion'

...voice you are searching for in your poetry is beginning to make itself be heard more and more, a voice that says, "it's me...this is what I have to say, and I know how to say it......listen!" . Good for you, lostandfounder!

me beneath the moon. Nice poem!

Pure thoughts.

use of words, really isn't 100, but I rounded up

no real faults, phrases could be a little better

better people than me liked it,

but I'm not a woman

so you know your audience - points for that