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All Comments on 'Restrictive Relative Clause'

by demure101

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greenmountaineergreenmountaineerover 10 years ago

I love smart word play in a poem but am aware it can be risky when overdone. I don't think that's the case here.

ishtatishtatover 10 years ago
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First two verses were quite Betjamenesque in feel and set the reader up for the final verse. Enjoyed with a smile - well done.

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 10 years ago
Tge similarity & contrast between the grammatical comma & a tree was very

Smart & incisive !! High 5-ed .

HarryHillHarryHillover 10 years ago
I missed the play between title and poem

except for the (relative) location of the tree

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