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by dorksicle

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TathagataTathagataalmost 19 years ago
If you did this

with a few better word choices it could be a great little poem.

" tap tap tap" is over used, and the " dusty shelf" is too.

But the whole idea of the poem and the length can make it a very powerful piece.

Play around with it a little.

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