All Comments on 'Rolling Wishes on Ice'

visuals.

And a charming piece.

Thank you

even a penny never knows where it will end up (or does it?)...great portrayal of synchronicity. This poem is subtle but says so much.

Very sweet, nice flow.

call me thick, I have no idea what this is about.

This is a strong visual piece:

the short line

"It rolls" - 3x

the other two lines

with "rolls", shorter also, drawing attention to, very effectively, what is the most important word here.

It mimics... and you seem to be writing with a slow rhythm