All Comments on 'Rotten Fruit'

in a poem that revels in its vileness. I think it'd be even stronger it you cut it back some: fewer sharper images would make the poem cut like a knife. Too many and it loses its overall shock value.

Love the last two lines. A perfect ending that feels just right to me.

break out of the SOS

i fived

although about half is trite, cliched

this is good

If you're brought withered blooms to see you off,

Do you want lessons? I'm quite good in this genre. laughs

" rotten , vulgar , withered , noxious " ----you make us hate the creep whoever it is ?!?! 5-ed .